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Parm Bains

125 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kristina Tesser Derksen (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, l thank my colleague for presenting the bill, and I am proud to be the seconder. My youngest son is completing his apprenticeship to become an electrician. Given our government’s very ambitious plans to engage in nation-building projects, whether in housing or other large projects, we know that we are going to have to encourage more young people to get involved in the skilled trades. Could my colleague please comment on how he sees the legislation’s encouraging young people to take up skilled trades?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
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Thanks 11%Claims 47%Anecdote 24%Reasoning 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 14 wordsI thank the member for seconding the motion and for talking about young people.Thanks Claims · 35 wordsThis is exactly what the bill would do. It would bring respect back to skilled trades and allow young people to think about the possibility of getting involved in something they may wish to do.Unearned certainty Anecdote · 30 wordsThey may want to be part of the national shipbuilding strategy and to work in Vancouver, but they are located somewhere else and doing their training in Ontario, for example.Anecdote Claims · 24 wordsThe bill would allow them to have the vision to be part of our defence programs that we are bringing forward in this country. Reasoning · 22 wordsI think this is exactly what young people are looking forward to doing: uniting this country and working towards something that matters.

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