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Kevin Lamoureux

1103 words · 63 sentences · 79 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 2%Positioning 6%Anecdote 7%Reasoning 20%Thanks 1%Aside 3%Claims 50%Procedure 3%The ask 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsit is a pleasure to rise and speak to private member’s bill, Bill C-266, brought forward by the member for Richmond East—Steveston.1Greeting Positioning · 36 wordsIt is quite encouraging to see a member of Parliament recognize an issue that has been around for many years. I am not too sure which individuals he consulted in regard to bringing this bill forward.Positioning Anecdote · 13 wordsI have been looking at this particular issue for a number of years.Anecdote Reasoning · 21 wordsThe whole idea of labour mobility, recognizing skills and so forth, is the right thing to do, especially at this time. Thanks · 10 wordsI thank the member for bringing forward such wonderful legislation.Thanks Aside · 29 wordsI am not sure what the Conservatives are going to do. I think they will be somewhat grudgingly supportive of it. I am a little disappointed in the Bloc.AsideOff point Positioning · 7 wordsQuebec does a lot of wonderful things.Positioning Claims · 19 wordsSome provinces do a better job of recognizing skills than other provinces. In many ways, Quebec leads the way. Procedure · 5 wordsI do not question that.Procedure Claims · 14 wordsHowever, what is being proposed here does not take away from Quebec at all. The ask · 13 wordsThis is something we should be looking at in a very serious way. Procedure · 2 wordsIn fact, ProcedureClaims · 119 wordsif we go back to the last federal election, we will find that Canadians were genuinely concerned with the three Ts: Trump, tariffs and trade. They were very concerned. The Prime Minister and candidates talked about how we could build one economy.Off point Before us today, we have an actual piece of legislation that adds to the value of building one Canadian economy. Obviously the member is listening his constituents, because this is a reflection of what we heard in virtually every region of our nation, recognizing that Canada can do so much more if we invest in Canadians. The advice of some is that this is provincial jurisdiction and the federal government does not have a role to play. Reasoning · 5 wordsI disagree with that wholeheartedly. Anecdote · 41 wordsI was a representative in the Manitoba legislature for almost 20 years, back in the late eighties, the nineties and at the turn of the century, 2and credentials and recognizing skill sets were of the utmost importance. That was back then.Anecdote Reasoning · 13 wordsThat is taken out of the context of where we find ourselves today. Claims · 44 wordsIndividuals acquire skill sets in one jurisdiction. Some jurisdictions or provinces, especially when we factor in indigenous communities as this legislation does, recognize the value of enabling some sort of a national framework. We are probably talking about 300‑plus positions, employing millions of Canadians. Reasoning · 19 wordsAffording an opportunity through the establishment of a national framework would not have to take anything away from provinces. Claims · 6 wordsThis is not about federal overreach. Reasoning · 20 wordsI would classify this as an opportunity to show that, as a national government, we can work collaboratively with provinces. The ask · 25 wordsA minister responsible for labour can look at the legislation, and if there is a need for some changes, then let us make the changes. Reasoning · 8 wordsHowever, the principle of the legislation is good. The ask · 53 wordsLet us see the list. Let us work with the different jurisdictions, whether it is the territories, provinces or indigenous communities, and see where we could actually help real people who have acquired skill sets that provide them the type of income they require to meet their personal needs or their family’s needs. Claims · 25 wordsWhat I liked in the member’s comments is that he made reference to having a national framework, and there is a time set for it. Reasoning · 18 wordsIf we give this thing royal assent and the clock starts ticking, we will get something tangible back, Vague promiseClaims · 20 wordsand there is an obligation to collaborate and work with provinces. Obviously, the provinces have to play a critical role. Anecdote · 12 wordsYears ago, I was the education critic in the province of Manitoba.3Anecdote Claims · 42 wordsThere are post-secondary facilities, secondary facilities, the private sector for people who are working already, unions and apprenticeship programs. I can tell members that the amount of effort, energy and investment put into the system in one way or another is significant. Reasoning · 28 wordsHowever, I like the idea of some form of national framework being established to reinforce just how important it is that we look at the issue of mobility. Procedure · 10 wordsWe can look at the discussion we are already having.Procedure Claims · 65 wordsIn good part, some premiers are advancing it more than others, recognizing, as we talk about building the one Canada economy, that our constituents do not say, “Well, this is provincial and this is federal.” They want politicians of different political stripes and different levels of government to act where we can, and that is what this legislation would do. It would provide direct action. Reasoning · 22 wordsIt does not just say, “Okay, we want the framework a year from now, and then everything sets and that is it.” Claims · 75 wordsThere would be reporting back to Parliament to ensure that we are making some progress on the issue.4 There would be an opportunity for review. These are the types of built-in measures from within, and based on the comments from the member for Richmond East—Steveston, they are there so that we can feel assured over the coming years that in fact we are moving forward and that it is tracked in a very serious way. Anecdote · 7 wordsThe member provided me with some quotes, AnecdoteAside · 4 wordsand I was impressed.Aside Claims · 11 wordsI know BCIT is a very important institution to my colleague. Procedure · 13 wordsHere is what Dr. Jeff Zabudsky, the president of BCIT, had to say: 5ProcedureClaims · 87 wordsCanada’s future prosperity is being shaped by large-scale priorities that rely heavily on a strong trades workforce. Whether it be building affordable and climate-resilient housing or infrastructure to strengthen national security, these national priorities all require a job-ready and adaptable trades workforce. For decades, [BCIT along with other colleges and polytechnics across Canada] have powered this progress—producing job-ready graduates and bridging academia, industry and government. When we work together, we don’t just respond to change, we drive it. This is coming from one of Canada’s premier institutions, Reasoning · 32 wordsand that is why I say it is more than just one level of government. We have stakeholders who have a lot to contribute to the potential of having a national framework. Positioning · 16 wordsI disagree with the member opposite when he talks about how the government has diminished it.Positioning Claims · 30 wordsWe have invested. In Red River College alone, there are a number of projects with millions of dollars to enhance skill opportunities and work directly with apprenticeship programs and unions.6 Positioning · 6 wordsCollectively, we can make a difference.PositioningVague promise Reasoning · 36 wordsWe can build a stronger, healthier economy if we are prepared to work more collaboratively with provinces and other stakeholders and recognize the lead role that provinces in particular have to play, along with indigenous communities.

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