“Mr. Speaker, I guess I know why the parliamentary secretary was the one reading the answer, because I do not think any Newfoundlander would be brave enough to read that and then go home and face their constituents. It almost seems like the member completely ignored what I just said about my bill not introducing new fees. It is right here. It says the minister must “examine the possibility”. It was even in the minister’s hands. I put that in there. It is so frustrating. We talk about consultation. Poor old Uncle Joe and his little fish hooks are going to ruin the whole fishery. There are 2,500 tonnes that come out of the recreational food fishery and over 40,000 tonnes from the fishery. More fish are dying due to natural causes. One seal eats three tonnes. Way more fish are being eaten by seals, and that problem is something that the Liberal Party refuses to even talk about, let alone handle. It is so frustrating. I would like to know if the parliamentary secretary even went to Newfoundland and asked someone involved in the recreational food fishery on a wharf outside of St. John’s what they wanted to do.”
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Positioning 15%Claims 74%The ask 11%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 13 wordsit sounds like the member is forgetting what his bill actually called for.PositioningClaims · 110 wordsIt is a tax on food for people in his province.It did not say anything about fishing seven days a week, 1but it did call for new red tape and licence fees on food fishers.2That is not what Newfoundlanders and Labradorians want.Unearned certaintyHe did not consult or listen to fishers.He put forward a proposal that threatened the entire commercial fishing industry in Atlantic Canada.That is tens of thousands of jobs and billions of dollars.3The Minister of Fisheries did a full survey to hear from the people in the province on what they want to see in the food fishery.4Over 9,500 people completed the survey.5Positioning · 14 wordsOur government knows how much people in his province care about the food fishery.PositioningThe ask · 19 wordsThe member should read the “What We Heard Report” we recently published to see what real consultation looks like.6Claims · 19 wordsHe will find that his proposals for more red tape and licence fees are not popular with food fishers.