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Kevin Lamoureux

109 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, in the earlier reply to my question, the member said that Canadians elected a prime minister. I think that is a misnomer that we need to correct. Canadians elect MPs. In fact, last night on a panel, Althia Raj said, “This Prime Minister definitely has an authoritarian streak. We’ve seen this with all types of legislation. I was struck after the by-election when he referred to his MPs in English as his ‘deputies’. At first he was saying that. I thought it was just an error in translation; he means ‘députés’, and then he was just saying it in English. But then he keeps repeating it, so I’m starting to wonder if he actually thinks members of Parliament are his deputies to do his bidding in the House of Commons, which is not their job.” Does the member believe he is the deputy to the Prime Minister, or does he serve his riding?”
Statement grade
D+
Average 51 / 100
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Claims 28%Positioning 32%Procedure 5%Promise 36%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 30 wordsI said right at the very beginning of my comments that my first priority is the constituents I represent.1 I sit in a wonderful national caucus that has 174 members.2 Positioning · 20 wordsI can assure the member that we are all equal in our caucus. Yes, the Prime Minister has a mission.Positioning Procedure · 5 wordsThe mission is very simple: ProcedurePromise · 15 wordsto build the strongest economy in the G7, to build Canada strong for all Canadians. Positioning · 15 wordsEvery Liberal member of Parliament has gladly accepted and agreed that this is our goal.PositioningUnearned certainty Promise · 24 wordsEvery Liberal member of Parliament will strive seven days a week to ensure that Canada becomes the strongest and healthiest country in the G7.Off pointVague promise

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