Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Jean Yip

157 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
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Claims 82%Procedure 10%Positioning 7%Thanks 1%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsthe YMCA of Greater Toronto is grounded in six core values: inclusiveness, integrity, kindness, optimism, respect and well-being.1 Procedure · 15 wordsOnce in a lifetime, we may encounter someone who truly lives and breathes these ideals.Procedure Claims · 111 wordsMedhat Sabet Mahdy, the former president and CEO of the YMCA of Greater Toronto, was one of those rare individuals.2 Earlier this month, sadly, he passed away.3 He was an inspiring community builder who was named to the Order of Canada in recognition of his more than 50 years serving the YMCA, 4which he transformed into a place for social infrastructure and health equity. He championed causes like combatting anti-Black racism and youth homelessness and expanding child care centres. His impact on Scarborough—Agincourt is ongoing through his work on the Bridletowne Neighbourhood Centre, a project that, when completed, will serve as a physical embodiment of his vision, compassion and unwavering commitment.5 Positioning · 11 wordsMedhat’s life’s work will continue to resonate for generations to come.Positioning Thanks · 2 wordsSmile on.Thanks

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