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Karim Bardeesy

99 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kathy Borrelli (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the new section 232 tariffs are gutting our tool, mould and die companies in Windsor-Essex and across the country. These shops are vital to our manufacturing industry. Hundreds of thousands of skilled workers will lose their jobs. Where is the Liberal Prime Minister’s plan? Workers need results now in order to survive. When will the Prime Minister finally do his job, get to the table and put our workers first for a change?”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 8%Positioning 8%Claims 84%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsI entirely reject the premise of that question.Procedure Positioning · 8 wordsWe are there for the workers right now.PositioningVague promise Claims · 83 wordsMy colleague, the deputy government House leader, is in Windsor today marking the reduction of the excise tax, 1which will help workers and all residential households in Windsor. In addition, the third shift has come to Stellantis in Windsor.2 The millionth battery cell has just been manufactured at the NextStar plant.3 We are working hard to develop the economy of Windsor with Windsorites, Vague promisewhile also helping them with the diversification that they and we know we need to do in this changing era.Off pointVague promise

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