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Anita Anand

76 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Scot Davidson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, by the time I finish asking this question, Canada will have done more trade with the United States than the value of this Prime Minister’s trade agreements with Ecuador, India and the UAE combined. The reality is that our trade relationship with the United States, what the Prime Minister calls a weakness, represents over $900 billion in annual trade and 2.7 million jobs, but he refuses to fight for these workers under our economy. Will the Prime Minister admit that the only real weakness is his own?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 43%Positioning 5%The ask 16%Procedure 1%Promise 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsthe reality is that we, along with this country as a whole, are continuing to diversify non-U.S. trade.Unearned certainty Positioning · 4 wordsThat means real results.Positioning Claims · 15 wordsThere have been more than 12 agreements over the past six months across four continents, 1The ask · 12 wordswhich is a result that I ask my hon. colleague to acknowledge. Procedure · 1 wordsFurthermore, ProcedurePromise · 26 wordsas we work to double non-U.S. trade, we will build Canada strong internally.Vague promise We will bring down internal barriers to trade.Vague promise We will build national projects.Off pointVague promise

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