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Corey Hogan

125 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jim Bélanger (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, tariffs on softwood lumber have tripled to 45%. Now hundreds of workers in Nairn Centre and Gogama are facing indefinite sawmill shutdowns, leaving families in real uncertainty. Workers in my riding whose jobs rely on free trade with the U.S. need real action now. When will the Liberals fight against these tariffs and fight for tariff-free trade?”
Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 6%Claims 45%Procedure 6%Positioning 15%Promise 18%The ask 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 7 wordswe will always stand with mill towns.GreetingVague promise Claims · 24 wordsThe combined duties and tariffs are scheduled to go down to 35%, based on the updates that came out the last couple of weeks, 1Procedure · 7 wordsso there is a small correction there, ProcedurePositioning · 13 wordsbut all still too painful and all still unjustified with the United States.Positioning Promise · 22 wordsThat is why we are working to both control the issues we can control and engage with the Americans on this issue.Vague promise Claims · 32 wordsWe have given $2.5 billion of supports to the forestry sector.2 We are going to be taking receipt of the forestry transformation task force’s report imminently, and it has many great ideas. Positioning · 6 wordsWe will be there for workers, PositioningVague promiseThe ask · 14 wordsand I welcome the member to join us and work with us on that.

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