“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister was elected on the premise that he was the man. Well, it seems that the man with the plan has disappeared. The Liberal government has been on the sidelines for far too long, failing to secure a single reduction on tariffs, while North Ontarians continue to lose both patience and jobs. Communities are being pushed to a breaking point, yet there is still no progress and no real results from the Liberal government. When will the Prime Minister finally get his act in gear and deliver the fair trade deal he promised a year ago?”
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Mr. Speaker, Promise · 25 wordsas my colleagues across the way have heard countless times, we will continue to make sure we get the best deal, not just any deal.Vague promiseProcedure · 7 wordsLet us talk about the last year.ProcedureClaims · 57 wordsWages have grown faster than inflation every month that the Prime Minister has been Prime Minister.1FDI, foreign direct investment, is the highest in 18 years, double that of the next nation in the G7.2We have record oil production, 3and non-U.S. trade is way up.4Last year we created more jobs than the United States did.5Positioning · 4 wordsTrade wars are brutal, PositioningOff pointPromise · 9 wordsbut we are going to win this trade war.Unearned certaintyThe ask · 7 wordsWe want the member’s help doing it.