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Steven MacKinnon

86 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Mel Arnold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, is the Prime Minister waving the white flag on U.S. tariffs? He sits by and does nothing while U.S. tariffs on steel have doubled, and they have tripled on lumber. He has failed in negotiating the reduction of a single tariff. Sawmills and the B.C. towns that they support are reeling from his failure to negotiate a deal. Speeches, illusions, excuses and failures are not going to cut it for the millions of families’ livelihoods that are at stake. When will the Prime Minister start delivering results instead of excuses?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 65 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 58%Claims 42%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Promise · 45 wordsthe Prime Minister and his team, the ambassador and the ministers involved, we are prepared and ready and stand willing to negotiate in good faith a deal with the United States.Vague promise It will not be any deal; it will be a deal acceptable for Canada.Vague promise Claims · 36 wordsContrast that with the Conservative position, with the member’s colleague going to Washington and saying that Canadians are having a hissy fit and their getting up every day and systematically urging us to take any deal.1 Promise · 5 wordsWe will not do that.Off point

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