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Maninder Sidhu

86 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Mel Arnold (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister’s illusions tactic and excuses are no help to Canadians. Instead of getting a trade deal last July, as he promised, he squandered his leverage with concessions made 10 months ago. He does not even show up to do his job, while Mexico makes progress ahead of him. Why did the Liberal Prime Minister make the strategic error of dragging this out instead of using the leverage we had at the beginning of the talks to get tariffs removed on Canadian goods?”
Statement grade
D–
Average 41 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 19%Anecdote 28%Promise 22%Procedure 8%Positioning 23%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 16 wordswe all know the vital importance of the Canada-U.S. relationship, especially as it relates to trade.Unearned certainty Anecdote · 24 wordsI have seen it first-hand in the private sector. I spent 13 years facilitating international trade, utilizing NAFTA and CUSMA in thousands of transactions.1AnecdoteOff point Promise · 19 wordsWe will continue to be at the table.Vague promise We need to ensure that we take a team Canada approach. Procedure · 7 wordsThat is exactly what we are doing.ProcedureUnearned certainty Positioning · 20 wordsWe do not want to go back to 2018, when the Conservatives asked us to capitulate and take any deal.2PositioningOff point

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