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Steven MacKinnon

87 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Heather McPherson (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the government is not listening to steelworkers. The government left USW off its CUSMA advisory council. It also shut out the Canadian Labour Congress and the over three million Canadian workers it represents. Instead, the government gave seats to more than a dozen CEOs, prominent Conservatives and just two labour representatives. How can the government claim to be there for workers while refusing to give them seats at the table? Will the government expand worker representation before CUSMA negotiations begin, starting with the CLC?”
Statement grade
C–
Average 58 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 29%Anecdote 60%Promise 11%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsthe minister’s advisory council includes the president of Unifor.1 It includes the president of FTQ.2 Workers’ interests will absolutely be represented on the advisory council.Unearned certainty Anecdote · 52 wordsI was proud, just a couple of weeks ago, to visit Sault Ste. Marie, with my incredible colleague from Sault Ste. Marie, to visit Algoma Steel and to meet with the steelworkers to talk about the exciting future of building Canada strong, buying Canadian and seeing that electric arc furnace fired up.3Anecdote Promise · 10 wordsWe are going to have a steel industry in Canada—Off point

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