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Kelly Block

76 words · 3 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Tom Osborne (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, you have obviously done a great deal of review on the bill. I will give the member an opportunity to elaborate. You talked about penalty increases and some concern with the size of the increases. The size of the increase, I believe, is to prevent bad intention or bad actors. If candidates, official agents or others are acting in good faith, they have no fear of an increase in the size of the penalty. I want to give you an opportunity to elaborate on your thoughts.”
Statement grade
D+
53 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Thanks 13%Reasoning 53%Claims 12%Promise 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI appreciate the explanation that my hon. colleague has provided, ThanksReasoning · 7 wordsand I would agree with that explanation. Claims · 9 wordsI do believe that the proposed increases are significant, Reasoning · 33 wordsand I think they demonstrate the seriousness with which both the committee and the drafters of the legislation take the monetary penalties that would be applied in cases where these fines are appropriate.Unearned certainty Promise · 17 wordsI will leave it to the committee to determine whether this is something that needs further scrutiny.Vague promise

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