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Anju Dhillon

157 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Michael Cooper (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, at first blush, someone might dismiss this bill as merely symbolic, but I could not more strongly disagree with such a sentiment, because there are very real knowledge gaps amongst Canadians with respect to the important role that juries play in the administration of justice, as well as the significant and unique challenges faced by jurors and former jurors. Can the member speak to the issue of the knowledge gap and how dedicating a week of appreciation will help close it?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
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Greeting 10%Positioning 10%Promise 8%Claims 73%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI thank my colleague from the bottom of my heart for his very thoughtful question.Greeting Positioning · 7 wordsHe is one of the solution makers.PositioningOff point Promise · 13 wordsWe want to show Canadians, or express to them, what jurors go through. Claims · 69 wordsI am sure a lot of my colleagues, those sitting here or who are listening on their televisions or computers, will have heard certain things that they were not aware of, such as the financial burden, the lack of mental health support and the undue burdens that a juror must face, including being sequestered for weeks without contact, without loved ones and without having access to the outside world.1 Positioning · 8 wordsThis is very difficult on a human being.Positioning Claims · 45 wordsPeople cannot get out of jury duty, 2unless there is a justification that would allow them to do so.Off point This kind of bill would raise awareness of what jurors go through, the sacrifices they make and the supports we can give them as a government.Vague promise

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