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Anju Dhillon

95 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am really pleased and very impressed with my colleague once again. I think of how important this issue is. It is a very critical aspect of our justice system. I know it is a very special day today. Not only is the member bringing forward a fantastic bill, but it is also her birthday, so I wish her a happy birthday and compliment her on this special day. I wish I could sing it in French, as it is such a beautiful song in French. I will pose my question. Why, from an emotional perspective and a financial perspective, do our jurors sacrifice so much in order to serve a critical role in our judicial state? Could the member provide further comment on that?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 40%Anecdote 16%Claims 44%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 38 wordsI thank my beloved colleague for his kind words and for being a source of inspiration to all of us. I really appreciate him from the bottom of my heart. I thank all members for their good wishes.Thanks Anecdote · 15 wordsI practised law and going to criminal court was part of the practice I had.1Anecdote Claims · 42 wordsIn criminal court, we see the stress jury members themselves are under. They walk in and it is a tense, sombre atmosphere. They sometimes have no idea why they are there; they are just summoned. Once they are summoned, they cannot refuse.

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