Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Frank Caputo

609 words · 28 sentences · 38 clauses

Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 2%Procedure 5%Anecdote 4%Claims 26%Aside 4%Thanks 55%Positioning 4%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 14 wordsit is always a pleasure to rise on behalf of the people of Kamloops—Thompson—Nicola.Greeting Procedure · 24 wordsToday I am especially honoured to rise in reply to Bill C-225, the private member’s bill that I put forward on intimate partner violence.Procedure Anecdote · 8 wordsIt feels as though it was just yesterday, AnecdoteClaims · 61 wordsbut it was around November when I was speaking about this bill and attempting to persuade this House to pass the bill.4 It is against that backdrop that I just had a brief conversation with one of my hon. colleagues, the Parliamentary Secretary to the government House leader, and learned the Liberals are going to support and vote for this bill.1 Aside · 11 wordsThis is tremendous. This is how things are supposed to work.Aside Thanks · 18 wordsI want to thank some people. The member for Niagara Falls—Niagara-on-the-Lake had a profound impact on this bill.Thanks Claims · 13 wordsHe gave up his private member’s slot so this bill could move forward.2 Thanks · 41 wordsI am profoundly grateful to him, and I think all victims of intimate partner violence and stakeholders are equally grateful. I am similarly grateful to the member for Cloverdale—Langley City, who gave up her spot in the private member’s bill rotation.3Thanks Claims · 39 wordsAs a result, this bill got to a vote on third reading in what I think is probably record time. It is not very often we see private members’ bills get to a vote within five or six months, Procedure · 7 wordsand here we are at third reading.Procedure Thanks · 25 wordsI am profoundly indebted to both members. I also want to recognize their service to Canadians and their recognition of victims of intimate partner violence.Thanks Positioning · 10 wordsThey are part of the solution by advancing this legislation.Positioning Thanks · 87 wordsI want to thank all who spoke on this bill, particularly, at third reading. I want to thank Bailey’s family, Paige, Karen, Shane, Trish, Debbie, Bailey’s children and all others who I may not have mentioned who are part of Bailey’s family, her loved ones and those who continue to mourn her death. I want to thank my staff, Rofiat Agboola, Stephanie Rennick, Jesus Bondo, Clare Cyr, Tracy Gilchrist and Christine Savage, for putting up with and navigating through all the ups and downs of this process.Thanks Anecdote · 12 wordsThere have been a few speed bumps, but, ultimately, we got here.Anecdote Claims · 37 wordsMy belief is that we will see unanimous support for this bill when we vote on Wednesday. I am mindful of the fact that the Minister of Justice’s office played a key role in meeting with victims. Thanks · 21 wordsI mentioned my staff, who went above and beyond and liaised with Zoe Romeo and other members of the minister’s staff.Thanks Claims · 6 wordsThere were extensive amendments at committee, Thanks · 63 wordsand I want to recognize the collaborative nature of the status of women committee and all witnesses who appeared, too many to name in this short speech, but they know who they are. I also want to thank all those who emailed me and wrote letters saying they suffered in silence from intimate partner violence and those who stopped me on the street, ThanksAside · 14 wordswhich happens to members of Parliament more than those watching at home might think, AsideThanks · 3 wordsand thanked me.Thanks Anecdote · 7 wordsA few stand out in my mind.Anecdote Thanks · 74 wordsThis bill is for them. With the assurance that the Liberals will be voting for this at third reading, with my belief that all other members will be supporting this bill and against the backdrop of just having welcomed new members who will get to add their signature to this bill, I am incredibly honoured and profoundly grateful to stand as the sponsor of a bill that recognizes the scourge of intimate partner violence, ThanksPositioning · 14 wordsbut, more concretely, addresses the issue here where it should be addressed in Parliament.Positioning

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