Analysis · Speech on a motion · beta

Tamara Kronis

163 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 91 / 100
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Anecdote 15%Reasoning 17%Claims 34%Positioning 10%The ask 23%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 25 wordsas I approach the first anniversary of my coming to this place, it is a good chance to reflect on the lessons I have learned.AnecdoteOff point Reasoning · 28 wordsOne of the important lessons someone learns in this place is that just because we can do something, it does not always mean it is a good idea. Claims · 56 wordsThe government motion we have in front of us would increase the size of committees, 1as well as the government’s control over them. There is a Conservative amendment to this motion that would simply ensure that while committees are expanded, a small number of them would continue to be able to hold the government to account.2 Positioning · 17 wordsIt is not about blocking change. It is about protecting the independence and effectiveness of this place.Positioning The ask · 37 wordsI would like to ask the government House leader if he can explain why the government would oppose a straightforward amendment to keep committees representative of the House and preserve committees’ ability to properly scrutinize government activity.

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