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Braedon Clark

172 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise today to congratulate Anna Brozek and Moriah Aladejebi, two students in my riding who have been named 2026 Loran scholars.1Greeting Claims · 125 wordsFrom a pool of over 5,400 applicants, the Loran Scholars Foundation recognizes just 36 young leaders who demonstrate strength of character and a deep commitment to service.2 Anna Brozek from Lockview High School in Fall River organizes student-led leadership conferences in Halifax.3 She is a former member of the Nova Scotia Youth Climate Council.4 She heads her school’s environment club, serves on student council, organized a youth climate seminar and helped design an indigenous student space at Lockview High.5 Moriah Aladejebi from Sackville High School is co-president of student council, co-captain of the varsity volleyball team and an inclusion support worker for children with disabilities.6 She volunteers weekly as a Sunday school teacher, organizes activities for international students and helped facilitate a Black youth-led conference.7 Thanks · 25 wordsNeedless to say, these are two impressive young women. On behalf of everyone in our riding, I congratulate Anna and Moriah on their great achievement.Thanks

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