A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 45%Positioning 39%The ask 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 69 wordsI rise today to honour the memory of Vinod and Shilpa Patel, two constituents of Sudbury who tragically lost their lives on April 7 in a highway accident on Highway 69.1This is not an isolated tragedy.Sadly, Highway 69 has claimed too many lives.For years, the people of Sudbury and northern Ontario have been promised that this dangerous corridor would be completed.Those promises have gone unfulfilled, Positioning · 60 wordsand families are paying for that inaction with their lives.I have written to Premier Ford urging him to finally deliver on this long overdue commitment.2The four-laning of Highway 69 is, in every way, a matter of life and death.Vinod and Shilpa Patel deserved to come home.Their families deserve better.Every driver on that road deserves better.PositioningThe ask · 26 wordsI call on the Government of Ontario to act before another family is torn apart on a highway that should have been made safe years ago.