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Mélanie Joly

88 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Christine Normandin (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, since the Prime Minister was elected a year ago tomorrow, the situation with Donald Trump has not improved. It is getting worse. That is why, tomorrow, the Prime Minister has to make good on the empty promises he has been making for a year now and come to the aid of Quebec’s economy. That is why we need a wage subsidy to prevent a wave of layoffs. That is why there needs to be support for our forestry industry in the face of the illegal U.S. tariffs. That is why the idea of EI reform must be revived. Will the Prime Minister finally rise to the occasion tomorrow?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 43%Promise 57%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 12 wordsfirst, we know that the Premier of Quebec is in Washington today.1 Promise · 18 wordsOf course we will work with her, knowing that she will stand up for Quebec’s businesses and workers.Vague promise Claims · 14 wordsI had the opportunity to speak with her, 2and so did the Prime Minister.3 Promise · 7 wordsWe will be there for our businesses.Vague promise Claims · 12 wordsWe already have various ways of supporting our businesses with their investments, Promise · 25 wordsbut we will do more.Vague promise It will be our pleasure to work with my colleague to ensure that we stand up for workers in Quebec.Partly on pointVague promise

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