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Mélanie Joly

95 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Ste-Marie (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, jobs must be saved. It is time for Ottawa to recognize how serious the situation is with the new tariff calculation. South Shore Furniture announced this morning that it is closing. This means 126 jobs will be lost in Sainte‑Croix and Coaticook. Cyrell AMP in Beloeil has had to raise its prices by 50% because of the tariffs. In Joliette, the small business Liard Industries has to pay five times more in excessive tariffs than before. Everyone in every region is struggling, including ADF in Terrebonne and Max Atlas in Saint-Jean-sur-Richelieu. Will Ottawa announce a wage subsidy tomorrow to prevent layoffs?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Claims 74%Positioning 12%Promise 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 70 wordsI have been in touch with the president of ADF in Terrebonne.1 I have been in touch with Max Atlas.2 I have also been in touch with the CEO of BRP.3 As a result, we have a great deal of information about the reality facing businesses right now. We are well aware that the change in the tariff calculation is having a negative impact on our businesses and our workers. Positioning · 11 wordsWe have been there for Canadians since the tariff war began.PositioningVague promise Promise · 14 wordsWe will continue to be there, Vague promiseand we will be there tomorrow as well.Partly on pointVague promise

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