Analysis · Question Period answer · beta

Rechie Valdez

90 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jagsharan Singh Mahal (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, when the Prime Minister took office, the projected deficit was $31 billion. He promised to spend less. Instead, he spent more. He piled on $90 billion in new spending, not on results but on bigger government. Bureaucracy is up, costs are up and Canadians are paying the price. Will the Prime Minister commit today that his deficit will not exceed the already outrageous $31 billion left behind by his predecessor, yes or no?”
Statement grade
C+
68 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 18%Claims 68%Positioning 14%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 16 wordsthis is not business as usual for our economy, so let us stick to the facts.Procedure Claims · 61 wordsSince September, Canada has created over 94,000 jobs and strong growth right across the country.1 Canada now has the highest employment rate compared to the United States.2 This is driven predominantly by women entering the force and joining because of our strong policies.3 Wages are up by 4.7%, faster than inflation, meaning more Canadians are keeping more of what they earn.4Partly on point Positioning · 13 wordsThat is how we are taking care of Canadians and growing Canada strong.PositioningOff point

Analysed on