“Mr. Speaker, after a lifetime of working, twice as many seniors can no longer afford to retire and have to keep working past age 65 just to make ends meet. That is alarming. The price of everything, including groceries, rent and gas, is going up. Many people now have to count every penny, even after a lifetime of work, and have to find a second career. Meanwhile, the Prime Minister continues to rack up charges on the nation’s limitless credit card. My question is simple. What does the Prime Minister intend to do to truly help our seniors?”
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Claims 81%Positioning 19%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordson this side of the House, as my colleague said, we lowered the retirement age.1Those folks over there wanted to raise it to 65.2Positioning · 11 wordsWe are there for seniors.Vague promiseWe are there for all Canadians.PositioningClaims · 23 wordsWe are also supporting them through the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, which will help 12 million Canadians who need it right now.3