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Joël Lightbound

92 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Eric Lefebvre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, this is the sad reality: More than half of all Quebeckers aged 50 and older are worried about running out of money when they retire. That is what the newspaper Le Journal de Montréal reported this weekend. Our seniors are no longer making ends meet, but the Liberal solution is more debt, higher costs and more taxes. Canadians are the ones paying the Prime Minister’s credit card bills. Our seniors built our country, and this is how we thank them? My question is simple: Will the Prime Minister stop saddling our seniors with more debt, yes or no?”
Statement grade
C
63 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Aside 8%Claims 86%Positioning 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 7 wordsI see the member is all smiles.Mockery Claims · 79 wordsI must remind him that, according to the International Monetary Fund, Canada has the best fiscal position and the second-fastest growth in the G7.1 Now, it is always strange to see the Conservatives claim to be standing up for seniors when they have systematically voted against measures that directly help seniors.Off point I will remind my colleague of one. There are 32,456 people in his riding, including many seniors, who benefit from the Canadian dental care plan, 2which he opposes. Positioning · 6 wordsMaybe he should reconsider his values.Off pointInsult

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