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Mélanie Joly

100 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Jacques Gourde (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, according to an in-depth feature in Le Journal de Montréal, the Liberal government is letting seniors fall through the cracks. With all the spending on credit in the budget, food inflation is rising much faster than old age security benefits. As a result, seniors are being forced to work at age 68 to pay their mortgage. While seniors are struggling to make ends meet, the Prime Minister seems more interested in showing off his resumé around the world. When will the Prime Minister decide to get to work on helping Canadian seniors make ends meet?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 54%Claims 17%Procedure 3%Aside 11%Promise 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 27 wordswe are there for seniors, in fact.Vague promise That is why every time we release a new economic announcement, we are thinking about how we can protect them.PositioningVague promise Claims · 17 wordsWe were in favour of lowering the retirement age to 65, 1but my colleague voted against that.2 Procedure · 3 wordsNot only that, ProcedurePositioning · 27 wordsbut we are there for seniors in various ways, including by fighting food inflation, Vague promisebecause it goes without saying that seniors are also affected by food inflation.Positioning Aside · 11 wordsMy colleague is very nice. We have a very good relationship, AsidePromise · 15 wordsand I will be pleased to work with him to address our seniors’ financial woes.Vague promise

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