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Evan Solomon

99 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we know what the state of the country is when Conservatives are asking the Liberal Prime Minister to do as good a job as Trudeau did and to keep the budget down to his level. Conservatives believe in responsible investment that delivers results for Canadians, not in reckless spending that drives up inflation and taxes. Families in Oshawa are struggling. They are working hard but making tough choices at the grocery store and at the pump. The Liberal government has not made life more affordable for them. If the Prime Minister truly believes this level of spending is justified, can he explain to families in Oshawa exactly when they will see lowered prices and relief?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 49%Claims 42%The ask 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsConservatives pretend to be champions of affordability, but they never get in the fight. Even worse, they vote against every measure to help families.Positioning Claims · 42 wordsWe cut taxes for 22 million Canadians.1 They are against it. We build affordable homes. They are against it. We introduce the groceries and food essentials that will put $1,900 into the pockets of a family of four.2 They are against it. Positioning · 25 wordsWe are fighting for jobs and affordability for Canadians.Vague promise All the Conservatives do is run down the economy in the middle of a trade war.Positioning The ask · 8 wordsThey should get on board and start building.Off point

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