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Gabriel Hardy

181 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I have said this a great deal already this afternoon: It is a fairly straightforward motion that says that if a party makes up a majority of the membership on the floor of the House of Commons, it gets to have a majority of the members on the standing committees. At the end of the day, the Conservatives are putting forward an argument. If a party had a 172‑seat majority and one person walked over to the opposition, the opposition is saying that it would be taking the position it is taking right now. That would be ridiculous. We know that it would not do that. Let us take a look at the tradition, heritage and history of Parliament. I think we recognize that a majority is in fact a majority that should be on the standing committees.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
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Aside 4%Procedure 16%Claims 41%Reasoning 23%Positioning 6%The ask 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 7 wordsthat is not a very good question, AsidePartly on pointProcedure · 5 wordsbut I will answer it.Procedure Claims · 26 wordsIf my colleague wants to talk about history, we can say that the past 11 years have been quite disappointing in terms of this government’s decisions. Procedure · 24 wordsAs I said in my speech, I think it is very important to stop focusing on the minutiae and the right to do something.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsThe Liberals are always telling us that they have the right to do this or that, even if it is unethical. There is a comma or a period in the law somewhere that gives them the right to act that way. Reasoning · 5 wordsHowever, who makes the laws? Claims · 7 wordsOrdinary people are fed up with this. Reasoning · 23 wordsThey want a government that prioritizes ethics, a government that understands that doing what is ethical is harder than doing what is allowed. Positioning · 10 wordsThey want a government that will be there for them.PositioningPartly on point Reasoning · 14 wordsCitizens created institutions to serve them, not so that those institutions could serve themselves. The ask · 19 wordsMy response to my colleague is that perhaps the government should adapt to the citizens who voted for it.Partly on point

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