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Gabriel Hardy

163 words · 13 sentences · 15 clauses

Replying to Andrew Lawton (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague spoke about a voter in his riding who understands that the Liberals are not here to defend the interests of ordinary Canadians and Quebeckers. I would like to ask my colleague the following question. How do his voters feel about the fact that, even though Canadians elected a minority government and a strong opposition, the Liberals want to take control of committees so they do not have to co-operate with any other parties anymore?”
Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Signal
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Thanks 10%Reasoning 7%Procedure 2%Claims 30%Positioning 50%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 17 wordsI am so pleased that the member asked his question in French. I thank him for that.Thanks Reasoning · 11 wordsBilingualism is an asset, and we are seeing that here today. Procedure · 4 wordsIt is simple enough.Procedure Claims · 4 wordsThe public is watching.Partly on point Positioning · 43 wordsThey thought that Parliament would be forced to collaborate, that Canadians would finally have a Parliament that puts the public’s interests first, rather than a government that only puts its own party’s interests first.1 What we are experiencing here is the complete opposite.Positioning Claims · 36 wordsThis is how it has been from the start. Every week, we are accused of blocking Parliament’s work, even though we are suggesting ways to improve the Liberals’ proposals so that everyone benefits in the end. Positioning · 23 wordsThe Liberals do not like that. What they want is simply what they want, when they want it and how they want it.Positioning Claims · 9 wordsUnfortunately, that is not what the public voted for. Positioning · 16 wordsIt is high time the Liberals realized that this is not an autocracy, but a democracy.Positioning

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