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Mark Gerretsen

113 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Dave Epp (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to congratulate the chief government whip for representing the largest riding in Canada by population. I am not sure if he is aware of that. The member cited a number of examples of precedents of floor crossing. However, he acknowledged that it is unprecedented that we now have a majority government by a combination of by-elections and floor crossings. Obviously, the by-elections change nothing, but would the member acknowledge that this is the first time a minority has tipped to a majority due to floor crossings and that this is a result of an orchestrated campaign from the Prime Minister’s Office?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 26%Procedure 9%Claims 25%Reasoning 6%Positioning 22%The question 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 29 wordsthe only reason the member knows I represent the riding with the largest population is that he represents the second-largest, 1and I believe his used to be the largest.Aside Procedure · 10 wordsI will agree with the member on the first point.Procedure Claims · 22 wordsThis is the first time that I have found, not just in Canada but in Westminster Parliaments generally, when this has happened, 2Reasoning · 7 wordsbut that does not make it illegitimate. Positioning · 25 wordsOn the second point, I would encourage the Conservatives to take off the tinfoil hats and stop the conspiracy theories about backroom deals and stuff.Positioning The question · 14 wordsThe member can tell me what the people who crossed the floor have received. Claims · 6 wordsI am not aware of anything.

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