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Steven MacKinnon

114 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Tamara Jansen (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, Canadians are being told that this is about building a space industry for the future, and of course, we all want to see Canada succeed in that space. However, they are also looking at this and asking a very basic question: How does a government end up committing $200 million of taxpayer money to lease a launch pad that is not even operational? Is this what happens when we move away from a rules-based, accountable framework, like the one that was built under Stephen Harper, and toward a discretionary, cheque-writing approach that looks a lot more like a Liberal‑style “enriching close friends” type of government?”
Statement grade
C+
69 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Aside 4%Positioning 18%Procedure 10%Claims 68%

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Madam Speaker, Aside · 5 wordsthat is an interesting one.Aside Positioning · 21 wordsI want to acknowledge the member’s, Partly on pointand perhaps that of other members of the opposition, devotion to following conspiracy theories online.PositioningOff point Procedure · 6 wordsLet us talk about economic impact.Procedure Claims · 37 wordsIn one of the great places in Canada, which is Nova Scotia, it could add 16,000 jobs and add $300 million to our GDP alone.1 It is currently under construction and set to be completed in 2028.2Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsI will read a quote: ProcedureClaims · 40 words“We are proud that Nova Scotia is home to Canada’s first commercial spaceport and recognize the critical role Maritime Launch [Services] will play in offering a satellite launch facility to the global market.”3 That was Premier Tim Houston in 2023.Partly on point

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