Replying to Jeff Kibble (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Madam Speaker, I would like to thank my colleague for his visionary intervention, where he focused on the crux of the issue, which is poor legislation and accountability. Yesterday at the defence committee, I questioned the new CEO of the Defence Investment Agency, previously of Goldman Sachs, who is a banker buddy of the Prime Minister. He stated that he has not been screened for national security conflicts of interest with his former high net worth clients who are connected to Chinese state-owned businesses. I would like my colleague to expand on the parallels in this bill regarding both Liberal insiders and a failure to protect Canadian assets and IP from the intervention of the Chinese Communist Party.”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 84. The grade is held to 75, 30 above Relevance.
75 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Claims 47%Reasoning 45%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Procedure · 12 wordsit is important for us to acknowledge what the minister himself said.ProcedureClaims · 36 wordsHe said that the world will want what Canada could have here.Well, the world is a lot of people, and some of them do not align with our values or our goals as a nation, Reasoning · 31 wordsso it makes sense that, if there is a gap where there is no screening over who owns what technology and what that technology is used for, that could be circumvented.Claims · 41 wordsRight now, which countries lead the world in rockets?We have the United States, Russia and China, all of whom would have some sort of interest in our north.1Again, Canadian rockets are the fundamental part to making this sovereignty happen.Partly on pointReasoning · 43 wordsWe need a legislative framework, sure, but we also need to have Canadian rockets, or else this launch pad would just be a launch pad for other nations’ rockets and, without the proper screening, for payloads that are for their objectives, not ours.Partly on point