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Dan Albas

228 words · 12 sentences · 19 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, I believe the member needs to expand his thinking. Just on that particular point, Magellan Aerospace in Winnipeg manufactures satellites and actually has satellites that are circling the earth today. We have an industry that is alive and has thousands of people employed. Having the ability to launch our own is good for Canada. It is good for the industry. The Conservative Party should come out very clearly to say that it supports the industry and wants to see a launch pad. I would ask this of the member who represents the Conservative Party on this file: Will the Conservative Party today commit its support for Canada having a launch pad?”
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Average 86 / 100
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Positioning 16%Reasoning 40%Claims 44%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsthis is how far down the government has gone, that the members are referring to a launch pad.PositioningPartly on point Reasoning · 13 wordsIn a competitive market that is well-regulated, there could be multiple launch pads, Claims · 59 wordsbut we have only one.1 We have only one because the government has given a $200-million lease over 10 years, $55,000 a day, to a company that had a lease for the same property from the Province of Nova Scotia for $13,500 a year.23 In its own corporate notes, it states that this company was not a going concern, 4Reasoning · 14 wordswhich means to the average person that it would be going out of business. Claims · 9 wordsThen, miraculously, the company got this lease after lobbying, Positioning · 12 wordsand suddenly we are all supposed to pin our hopes on it.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 11 wordsThe gentleman across the way mentioned a company in his riding. Positioning · 6 wordsWe are very supportive of that, PositioningReasoning · 33 wordsbut I will remind the member that, first, a properly functioning market would have probably more than one spaceport. Second, we would probably see individual money being brought in, which could create that. Claims · 21 wordsLast, those satellites do not miraculously sprout wings and fly off into the stratosphere from the space pad. They need rockets. Reasoning · 32 wordsHow can we support our industry, and how can we encourage industries to come here? Right now, if this thing were put to test right away, it would be other countries’ rockets.

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