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Kevin Lamoureux

131 words · 3 sentences · 3 clauses

Replying to Dan Albas (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the member for Winnipeg North mentioned his admiration for what the U.K. has done, in terms of its space program. In fact, the outer space program act of 1986 established very clearly under the U.K. model that the licensing authority must be satisfied that an activity will not impact national security. There is no statutory duty to consult DND or CSIS in Bill C-28 and no defined national security clearance. This completely contrasts with what the U.K. has. Does this member realize that there is a real existing gap that puts us at risk, compared to our G7 partners?”
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Claims 21%Positioning 18%The ask 60%

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Madam Speaker, Claims · 28 wordswhat I would recognize is that Canada is the only G7 country that the member makes reference to that currently does not have its own space launch capabilities.1Partly on point Positioning · 24 wordsNow we have a Prime Minister who has motivated the government as a whole to recognize the opportunity for us to enter this area.PositioningOff point The ask · 79 wordsAs opposed to being completely fixated on why we should not bring forward the legislation, I would suggest to the Conservative Party that its fixation should be on how we could improve the legislation, recognize that the principle of having the legislation before us today is a very good thing and allow for the legislation to go through a process where the member and the Conservatives would have more input on how it could come back at third reading.Partly on point

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