“Madam Speaker, we are talking about legislation and the Canadian space launch act. My colleague is from Manitoba, so he will be happy to know that I just recently met with a group called Manitoba Advantage from the Manitoba Chambers of Commerce, industry and the Business Council of Manitoba, which are all behind growing our aerospace industries. We heard from a colleague from Quebec saying that Quebec is poised to grow our aerospace industries. I want to support Ontario, specifically the Waterloo region, for our strong tech sector. We are also poised to grow in the aerospace industries. We have two universities and a community college in Waterloo region. Can my colleague from Manitoba explain the importance of the aerospace industry in connecting with our post-secondary institutions?”
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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 15 wordsI wish I had thought of making the direct link to that in my comments.AsideProcedure · 6 wordsAt the end of the day, ProcedureClaims · 18 wordsand I have said this in the past, Ontario, Quebec and Manitoba have very strong, healthy aerospace industries.Reasoning · 16 wordsOne of the reasons is because of postgraduate educational facilities that have so much to contribute.Claims · 40 wordsWe have some of the smartest intellectual individuals and hard workers who make up our communities, whether in Waterloo, Winnipeg or Montreal and the surrounding areas.There is so much that can be contributed to aerospace and the space agency.Reasoning · 19 wordsThat is one of the reasons why it is so important that we get this legislation off the ground.
