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Philip Lawrence

1112 words · 66 sentences · 84 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Procedure 8%Thanks 9%Claims 38%Anecdote 4%Positioning 11%Reasoning 31%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 18 wordsI will start by saying I will be splitting my time with the spectacular member for Flamborough—Glanbrook—Brant North.Procedure Thanks · 74 wordsI have to move on to a brief but very sad note. I want to take a moment to acknowledge the tragic incident that happened in my riding in the town of Cobourg yesterday. An OPP officer in my community died in the line of duty in a tragic accident.1 I want to take a moment to remember Sergeant Brandon Malcolm’s memory and send our thoughts and prayers to his family.2 Godspeed, my friend.Thanks Procedure · 7 wordsI will start the speech in earnest.Procedure Claims · 33 wordsCanada has a proud space past. We have numerous accomplishments. Look at the satellites we have built and put into space. There is the Magellan company, which the member for Winnipeg North mentioned.Partly on point Thanks · 24 wordsWe are all very proud of that. We are proud of great astronauts like Chris Hadfield and Roberta Bondar, and Jeremy Hansen most recently.3Thanks Anecdote · 42 wordsI am a “space‑phile”. I love two academic subjects. One is space and the other is politics. I was glued to the television, watching Jeremy Hansen. I had the Artemis II app as they made it all the way around the moon.4Anecdote Claims · 28 wordsIt is the farthest humans have ever been.5 A Canadian was not just a part of that, but a big part of that. He was leading the charge.Partly on point Procedure · 11 wordsI will warn that criticism of the legislation is coming forward, ProcedurePositioning · 25 wordsbut let there be no doubt that Conservatives are full‑throated supporters of Canadians taking their rightful position in the lead in the next space race.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 15 wordsLet me talk a little about some of the concerns that come from this legislation.Procedure Claims · 51 wordsIt purports to create a legislative framework for the launching of rockets into space from Canada. That is a notable and laudable objective, and it is something we all should aspire to. The challenge is what is actually in the legislation or, more accurately put, what is not in the legislation. Procedure · 17 wordsIf I can, I will go over some of the things that are not in this legislation.Procedure Reasoning · 34 wordsWhen we look at a piece of legislation that purports to create a framework for the launching of rockets into space, one would think a key term included in it is the word ”launch”. Claims · 126 wordsIt is not included.6 “Launch vehicle” is also something one would think we would want to define in the legislation. It is not included. “Re‑entry vehicle” is another important piece. It is a descriptor and another important definition that one might want to include in that legislation. Let us go over some of the broad topics now that are not included in the legislation, such as permitting an authorization system, the certification and operation of launch and re‑entry sites, safety requirements, financial responsibility and insurance, liability and indemnification, zoning and land use, the application of international agreements and standards, emergency powers and stop orders, administrative enforcement matters, exemptions and exclusions.7 I know the members across will ask Conservatives how we are going to vote on this. Positioning · 51 wordsMy question is, what are we going to vote on? Where is the beef, as they say? The legislation might as well be two lines, saying the minister shall grant, on the terms that they wish, a launch pad wherever they want, whenever they want, and we shall just trust them.Positioning Procedure · 11 wordsI have something I would like to share with all Canadians.Procedure Reasoning · 166 wordsIf a politician comes up to them, regardless of whether they are a Liberal, a Conservative, from the NDP, a Green or from whatever party, and says to just trust them, do not do it. Here is a real challenge that comes from the uncertainty and the overreliance on regulation in the legislation. The challenge is the two Cs. One is certainty and the other is corruption. When we are looking to invest in an economy, when we are looking to invest in a business and when we are looking to buy anything, we want certainty. When an investor is looking from around the world and the trillions of dollars that float around in the global economy, they ask where they are going to put that money. They could put it into a country that has a defined regulatory system and prescribed legislation that allow people to understand with full certainty how their money will be utilized and whether or not a launch will be permitted, Claims · 6 wordsor they could invest in Canada, Positioning · 21 wordswhere, at some point, there will be some regulations about something regarding a launch that will, no doubt, help Liberal insiders.PositioningUnearned certainty Reasoning · 23 wordsIf I am sitting outside of Canada and I have billions of dollars to invest, I am thinking, “Canada has many great things.” Claims · 29 wordsWe have some of the leading research scientists in the world. We have great people. We have great resources and great universities, like Waterloo, that are leading the charge. Reasoning · 42 wordsWhat we do not have from this legislation is certainty, and without certainty, we really do not have anything. It is a challenge, because we do not know how that is going to be interpreted and what the minister is going do. Claims · 23 wordsThe minister, in response to my colleague’s question, actually said he just copied his homework, and in the U.S., they do the same.8 Positioning · 24 wordsWhen he says that about the U.S., I hope he is not copying Russia or China. That would be troublesome for its own reasons, PositioningClaims · 57 wordsbut he said they are copying the homework. That is not even entirely true, because in the U.S., the licensing of launch pads is actually done by independent professionals that operate at arm’s length from the government, such as the FAA and other professionals.9 In Canada, with this legislation, we would put it directly under the minister, Reasoning · 20 wordswhich then opens us up to the other troublesome C, which is corruption. When given absolute power, it corrupts absolutely. Claims · 46 wordsThat was said many years ago. We have certainly seen it over the last 10 years. Whether we are talking about the WE scandal, SNC-Lavalin, the billions of dollars blown on consultants or the Canada Infrastructure Bank, these ministers have a penchant for making bad decisions.Off point Procedure · 4 wordsAs I said earlier, ProcedureReasoning · 55 wordsif any politician of any stripe comes up to a Canadian and says, “Just trust me,” that is the key for all Canadians to know not to trust them. There is a reason why we put the rule of law in place. It is that it creates a level, equal playing field for all Canadians. Claims · 26 wordsThere is perhaps a reason that we have seen $1 trillion of capital flowing out from our country during the Trudeau and Carney eras of government.10Off point Procedure · 3 wordsThis is challenging.Procedure

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