Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Philip Lawrence

279 words · 21 sentences · 23 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 5%Claims 20%Positioning 7%Procedure 13%Reasoning 11%Thanks 8%The ask 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Aside · 8 wordsI apologize. I should say “the Prime Minister”.Aside Claims · 7 wordsIt is 10 years of Liberal rule, Off pointPositioning · 8 wordsand I appreciate the ability to underline that.Positioning Aside · 7 wordsIt is another Liberal, one might say.Aside Claims · 13 wordsIn the last decade, we have seen $1 trillion of capital flowing out.1Off point Positioning · 12 wordsIt is precisely what this legislation would embody that is the problem.Positioning Procedure · 26 wordsHere we are. Now we are sitting here and we have to make a legislative decision. We have to decide whether or not we support this.Procedure Claims · 37 wordsWhat Conservatives are really asking for is to know what we are voting for. Nancy Pelosi famously once said they will pass the bill and then read the bill.2 The Conservatives believe the opposite should be true. Reasoning · 9 wordsWe need to know what is in this legislation. Thanks · 22 wordsMy hon. colleague has posed a number of great questions about security and the screening of the payloads that will go up.Thanks Reasoning · 9 wordsWe need to know what is in the legislation. Procedure · 9 wordsI have two constructive suggestions for the members opposite.Procedure The ask · 28 wordsOne is to include necessary things, such as a definition of a launch vehicle in the legislation. Amend it so that we know what is in the legislation. Procedure · 2 wordsThe second, ProcedureThe ask · 68 wordsif they really wish to go forward with regulations, is that there is nothing in law to stop them from publishing today draft regulations that would demonstrate to all Canadians exactly what their intent is going forward. Take some of the ministerial discretion and put it onto the people who are the professionals who are able to objectively review it and provide us with objective decisions on it. Reasoning · 14 wordsThose are a couple of things that would certainly help Conservatives make a decision.

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