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Philip Lawrence

72 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Xavier Barsalou-Duval (Bloc Québécois)
“Mr. Speaker, I look forward to working on the bill with my colleague when we get to committee stage. My question for him is the following. We have a bill that is about 10 pages long and has almost no details on the government’s real intentions. We are being told that everything will come through regulations. Does my colleague find that reassuring and does he think that is enough to turn this bill into a real law?”
Statement grade
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Average 96 / 100
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Positioning 10%Claims 40%Reasoning 50%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsI find it troubling, PositioningClaims · 29 wordsbut more importantly, Partly on pointso do many Canadians, including those who control the capital that would ultimately be used to build space launches and invest in rockets here in Canada. Reasoning · 16 wordsBecause of this uncertainty, they would not know whether their investment will be returned to them. Positioning · 3 wordsI agree 110%.Positioning Reasoning · 20 wordsA piece of legislation on something as complex as space travel should not be a couple of pages in length.

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