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Mike Kelloway

81 words · 4 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Tamara Kronis (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, in communities like mine there is a lot of ambition around space launches. Communities like mine are still waiting to know when we are going to get a chance to clean up derelict vessels around the coastline. I have proponents in my communities who want to remove the boats, but the Liberals defunded and closed the program. When are you going to reopen it and deliver relief to my communities?”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 20%Positioning 48%Claims 32%

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Procedure · 16 wordsMr Speaker, I am not sure when there is going to be time to do that, ProcedurePositioning · 10 wordsbut I will say it is a very important issue.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsI was with fisheries as the parliamentary secretary.1 In terms of the Pacific Coast, we know that there are challenges there, but we are working and, Vague promisePositioning · 29 wordsas a member close to me says, we are laser‑focused on that.Off point When it comes to Canada establishing sovereignty and working on space, this bill is the right way—Positioning

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