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Gabriel Hardy

195 words · 12 sentences · 18 clauses

Replying to Steeve Lavoie (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I thank my colleague for his remarks and I would like to ask him a question. I know it takes time to prepare a speech. What I am hearing is a lot of frustration. What I have also been hearing from the start is a lack of long-term vision for our country. During his 10‑minute speech, I heard him say that people are not happy and that we are doing nothing. However, what I have been hearing from people in my riding, which is next to my colleague’s, is that they are happy with what the government is doing right now. People have never been this happy to see their government taking action, moving forward and making progress. That is what people want us to do. I am hearing the opposite from my colleague. Today we are talking about Bill C‑28. I would like to know if my colleague is for or against this bill. Is he for or against the fact that we are investing in our future for our younger generations?”
Statement grade
D+
52 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Thanks 5%Positioning 16%Claims 68%Procedure 2%The ask 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 10 wordsI was taking notes because that is a good question.Thanks Positioning · 5 wordsThe frustration is very real.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 17 wordsThe member mentioned long-term vision, but people have been waiting for 11 years and are still waiting.1 Positioning · 14 wordsThe Liberals are very good at making announcements that end up being empty promises.Positioning Claims · 49 wordsThere are no shovels in the ground. They just talk about huge, multi-billion dollar projects, while families are struggling to make ends meet. The Liberals keep unveiling major projects that they say are on their way and telling us how wonderful they will be, but there are no results. Positioning · 7 wordsUnfortunately, it is all smoke and mirrors.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 4 wordsThat is the result.Procedure Claims · 39 wordsA recent report states that Canadians were impressed with the Prime Minister’s trips, which cost over half a million dollars in in-flight catering alone, 2but that they are extremely disappointed that he has failed to deliver on affordability issues. Positioning · 6 wordsThat is people’s real-life experiences talking.Positioning The ask · 17 wordsWhen my colleague talks to his constituents, he should take a look at the Angus Reid report, Claims · 27 wordswhich says that people were pleased to see the Prime Minister travelling but that they are extremely disappointed that they cannot afford groceries despite working so hard.3Off point

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