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Statement grade
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 60. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
Signal
38 / 100
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Relevance
0 / 100
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Respect
100 / 100
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Clarity
100 / 100
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10% Positioning 47% Claims 35% Reasoning 9%
Structure · 7 steps
Claims · 0
Echo · said 13 times
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 words I would love to share what my constituents and other Quebeckers are telling me. Procedure Positioning · 60 words They are fed up with the empty promises they keep hearing from this government, which takes their tax dollars, spends it on all kinds of ideological projects and leaves them with less in their pockets. The Liberals then tell them not to worry, because they are going to get a bit of money back, to make things a little easier. Positioning Claims · 16 words Clearly, people are struggling to make ends meet , so they are going to take the cheque. Reasoning · 13 words In any case, it is basically their own money being returned to them. Positioning · 7 words Can members guess what people really want? Positioning Claims · 34 words They want to keep their money in their pockets. They want to be able to make it through the month, paying for groceries, gas and their mortgage or rent. That is what they want. Off point
At a glance
Lost points for Off point ×11 Positioning ×5 Procedure
Off topic None of this statement addressed the specific topic under debate.
Little substance Much of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.
Echo ×13 “People are struggling to make ends meet.” Said 13 times by 10 members. Every time it was said →
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Signal · 38
6 of 17 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I would love to share what my constituents and other Quebeckers are telling me.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “They are fed up with the empty promises they keep hearing from this government,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “which takes their tax dollars, spends it on all kinds of ideological projects and leaves them with less in their pockets.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “The Liberals then tell them not to worry,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “because they are going to get a bit of money back, to make things a little easier.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Can members guess what people really want?” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 0
11 of 17 deductions are Relevance
The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “They are fed up with the empty promises they keep hearing from this government,” About the government’s broken promises generally, not the bill’s measures.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “which takes their tax dollars, spends it on all kinds of ideological projects and leaves them with less in their pockets.” About government spending and ideological projects, not the bill’s launch framework.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “The Liberals then tell them not to worry,” About the Liberals’ reassurances to voters, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “because they are going to get a bit of money back, to make things a little easier.” About benefit payments to ease affordability, a subject the space launch bill does not touch.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Clearly, people are struggling to make ends meet,” About people struggling to make ends meet, not the bill’s subject.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “so they are going to take the cheque.” About people accepting a benefit cheque, not the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In any case, it is basically their own money being returned to them.” About benefits returning people’s own money, a subject outside the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Can members guess what people really want?” A rhetorical device about constituents’ wants, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “They want to keep their money in their pockets.” About keeping money in pockets, an affordability theme the bill does not address.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “They want to be able to make it through the month, paying for groceries, gas and their mortgage or rent.” About paying for groceries, gas and housing, not the bill’s launch and re-entry framework.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is what they want.” A summary of constituents’ wishes, not the bill under debate.
Respect · 100
0 of 17 deductions are Respect
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Nothing lost points.
Clarity · 100
0 of 17 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Nothing lost points.
Echo · 1 repeated line
Words members of Parliament keep repeating, found by the same rule for every member. No score depends on it.
“People are struggling to make ends meet.” Said 13 times by 10 members. Every time it was said →
Claims · 0
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
No checkable claims.