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Gabriel Hardy

144 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Marianne Dandurand (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the bill.
“Mr. Speaker, I was listening to my colleague respond to his riding neighbour about measures that are not helping the people in his riding. I would like to know whether the people in his riding have benefited from or will benefit from the Canada groceries and essentials benefit or the Canadian dental care plan. These are immediate affordability measures. Have his constituents spoken to him about those programs, and are they receiving those benefits?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 10%Positioning 47%Claims 35%Reasoning 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 14 wordsI would love to share what my constituents and other Quebeckers are telling me.Procedure Positioning · 60 wordsThey are fed up with the empty promises they keep hearing from this government, which takes their tax dollars, spends it on all kinds of ideological projects and leaves them with less in their pockets. The Liberals then tell them not to worry, because they are going to get a bit of money back, to make things a little easier.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsClearly, people are struggling to make ends meet, so they are going to take the cheque. Reasoning · 13 wordsIn any case, it is basically their own money being returned to them. Positioning · 7 wordsCan members guess what people really want?Positioning Claims · 34 wordsThey want to keep their money in their pockets. They want to be able to make it through the month, paying for groceries, gas and their mortgage or rent. That is what they want.Off point

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