Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Kristina Tesser Derksen

178 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 48%Greeting 5%Positioning 17%Thanks 23%Promise 7%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsone year ago, the people of Milton East—Halton Hills South placed their trust in me to represent them in the House.1 Greeting · 9 wordsIt is an honour I carry proudly every day.Greeting Positioning · 8 wordsIn that time, we have delivered real results.Positioning Claims · 10 wordsWe have secured $2.9 million for affordable housing in Georgetown, 2Positioning · 6 wordsand we are just getting started.PositioningVague promise Claims · 26 wordsThrough the Canada summer jobs program, we have increased opportunities for young people by adding 100 positions this year, 3which is an increase of nearly 85%.4 Positioning · 8 wordsI have shown up, and I have listened.Positioning Claims · 23 wordsI have acted by helping residents in Milton and Georgetown navigate federal services and by cutting through red tape when it mattered most. Thanks · 41 wordsI am so grateful for the support of my family, my community, my wonderful staff, my fabulous colleagues and for the leadership of the Prime Minister, who is focused on bringing Canadians together, uniting people across regions and across party lines.Thanks Claims · 5 wordsWe are one year in, Positioning · 9 wordsand there is still so much more to do.Positioning Promise · 12 wordsI will keep working every day to deliver for Georgetown and Milton.Vague promise

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