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Tamara Kronis

209 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 41 wordseach April 28th we come together in Nanaimo—Ladysmith, throughout Canada and around the world to solemnly mark a day of mourning in memory of people who have lost their life on the job and to renew our commitment to safe workplaces.1 Reasoning · 41 wordsWhether someone is a chef on a ferry, a scaffolder on a construction site, a machinist in a mill or an administrator in an office, every worker deserves to know they will return home safe at the end of the day. Claims · 11 wordsToday we remember the people who did not make it home. Thanks · 12 wordsWe stand with the families, friends and co-workers who carry that loss, ThanksPromise · 10 wordsand we recommit ourselves to making workplaces safe for everyone.Vague promise Reasoning · 42 wordsHowever, this day is not only about looking back. It is also about moving forward. It is about speaking up when something is not right. It is about supporting one another. It is about making sure safety is never treated as optional. Promise · 36 wordsMy door is always open to the workers in my community to discuss federal issues related to the important work they do. Today we honour the fallen and we renew our commitment to protect the living.Vague promise Claims · 16 wordsEvery accident, every injury and every loss of life in the workplace is one too many.

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