Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Procedure 19%Claims 47%Anecdote 21%Thanks 13%
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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 26 wordsI would like to take this opportunity to mark the 50th anniversary of an organization in my constituency, the Association de Chasse et Pêche de Contrecoeur.2ProcedureClaims · 41 wordsThe organization, which mainly brings together duck hunting and ice fishing enthusiasts, is renowned for its famous Festival de la Brimbale, where a temporary village is set up on the river during the brief period when the St. Lawrence freezes over.3Anecdote · 25 wordsThese are magical moments that allow both enthusiasts and those who dabble to get together with family and friends in a setting like no other.AnecdoteClaims · 28 wordsPeople from all generations head outdoors during the coldest part of winter to enjoy nature and all it has to offer together.The association holds a significant record, Procedure · 7 wordsand not just any record at that.ProcedureClaims · 14 wordsSince 2016, it has held the record for the world’s largest tip-up, 1or brimbale.Anecdote · 13 wordsI am proud to have been there for its inauguration 10 years ago.4AnecdoteThanks · 24 wordsIn closing, I would like to offer the entire organization, as well as its president, René Béland, my warmest congratulations on this 50th anniversary.Thanks