Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Shannon Miedema

215 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 19%Positioning 24%Claims 45%Thanks 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 41 wordstoday I rise to mark one year since I was first elected to serve the people of Halifax, 1and I am so happy to be here. It has been the honour of a lifetime, and what a year it has been.Greeting Positioning · 18 wordsI am proud that our government is focused on the opportunities that arise in addressing current global challenges.Positioning Claims · 96 wordsWe are investing in major projects at home.Vague promise We are forging new trading partnerships across the globe.Vague promise We are securing our sovereignty and our economic resilience, Vague promiseand we are doing so in a way that allows us to continue with our environmental and climate objectives. At the same time, we are ensuring support for Canadians who need it the most.Vague promise We are responding to the rising cost of living by cutting taxes and launching affordability measures such as the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, all while maintaining the many other social supports that people depend on.2 Positioning · 33 wordsWe have shown up, listened and acted. Whether through nation-building projects or local targeted support, this year has been building a stronger Canada. I am so proud to be part of this team, PositioningThanks · 27 wordsand I am grateful to my family, friends and supporters. I wish a happy first anniversary to all members of the House from the class of 2025.3Thanks

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