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Mélanie Joly

103 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Pierre Paul-Hus (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberal government will present its economic update this afternoon. The Prime Minister promised to spend less, but he doubled the deficit. He promised to make cuts to the public service, but he increased bureaucracy by 7%. In Quebec, 40% of our seniors live on just over $20,000 a year, while long-term care rents have risen to $4,000 a month. When will the Liberal Prime Minister stop running up deficits so that our seniors can finally get their heads above water?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 73%Procedure 13%Positioning 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordswe are building a strong economy while protecting our social safety net and getting our house in order. Procedure · 5 wordsWhat are we really doing?Procedure Claims · 9 wordsWe are spending less so we can invest more.Vague promise Procedure · 8 wordsIn concrete terms, the results speak for themselves.ProcedureUnearned certainty Claims · 48 wordsWe have the second-highest growth in the G7, 1Partly on pointand we also have the most enviable fiscal position and fiscal reality in the G7. At the same time, we are bringing down the cost of groceries.2Vague promise At the same time, we are also lowering gas prices at the pumps.3Partly on pointVague promise Positioning · 15 wordsBasically, we are here for Canadians, and this is what a competent government looks like.PositioningOff point

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