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Mélanie Joly

82 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Leah Gazan (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, while the Liberals line corporate pockets with sovereignty incentives paid for by the taxpayer, the NDP is fighting to ban creepy surveillance pricing at the grocery checkout. The Liberals shut this down. They have a second chance. Today’s spring economic statement is another chance to decide who they stand with: people getting ripped off at the grocery checkouts or companies that are exploiting the population. Will they act and ban surveillance pricing once and for all, or will they keep protecting corporate profits?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 7%Reasoning 10%Claims 34%Promise 49%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsof course, we believe in competition, PositioningReasoning · 8 wordsbecause we believe that competition brings down prices. Claims · 28 wordsThat is why we have said clearly that we would be hawkish on competition. That being said, we are very concerned with the allegations linked to algorithmic competition. Promise · 40 wordsWe want to make sure that, ultimately, consumers are well protected.Vague promise This is work that we will be doing as well with the provinces and territories, Vague promiseand of course we will be there for consumers and Canadians across the country.Partly on pointVague promise

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