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Karim Bardeesy

1593 words · 76 sentences · 96 clauses

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Claims 63%Thanks 2%Positioning 12%Procedure 10%Aside 4%Anecdote 6%Reasoning 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 75 wordsit is a pleasure to speak to this bill today and to set it in the context of what has been already an incredibly exciting year for space in Canada, a year in which we have sent and seen return back, from the far side of the moon, Colonel Jeremy Hansen.1 With Dr. Jenni Gibbons, they were a key part of that work with respect to the Artemis II mission of the Canadian Space Agency.2Partly on point Thanks · 25 wordsI appreciate the comments from my colleagues from Souris—Moose Mountain and London—Fanshawe with respect to some of the particularities of the bill and their concerns.Thanks Positioning · 18 wordsIt is rare that we get a piece of legislation that has some inspiring words in its text, PositioningProcedure · 58 wordsbut I am going to share some of these and will come back to the manner in which this is inspiring specifically. There were some questions around what was in the legislation and some vagueness. However, I read some very specific language in the legislation. I want to read out here what it says under proposed subsection 3.2(1): ProcedureClaims · 54 wordsThe following definitions apply in this Act. launch vehicle means (a) a rocket; or (b) a vehicle, other than a rocket, that is designed to ascend to Earth orbit or beyond. re-entry vehicle means a vehicle that is designed to be returned by its operator, substantially intact, from Earth orbit or beyond to Earth. Positioning · 52 wordsIn the very text of this legislation, we have the imagination, the promise and the hope of space exploration. The thing that is inspiring millions of Canadians and has inspired hundreds of millions of people around the world with the Artemis II mission is part of the framework of this legislation today.Positioning Claims · 159 wordsIt is talking about vehicles that were not earlier contemplated in our aeronautics legislation. The Canadian space launch act sets up a position where we can imagine vehicles we did not have as deployable resources, imagining a sector that is emerging, but needs some regulatory shape to it, and bringing it into life. I think that, very crucially, the legislation does a very good job of balancing the need to promote risk-taking and the gathering and deployment of resources across Canada with the appropriate supervision of the minister, the departments and others, but with the right calibration toward risk-taking and setting into motion an industry that already exists. However, from a G7 perspective, the very specific things we want to do in this sector we are not doing as much in Canada as other G7 partners. The Canadian Space Agency is a key partner in the Artemis II mission.3 The European Space Agency is very much involved as well.Partly on point Procedure · 17 wordsI forgot to mention that I will be sharing my time with the member for Peace River—Westlock.Procedure Aside · 67 wordsMy enthusiasm for this mission and all things space in this moment is very heightened.Partly on point I apologize for that brief oversight. It is not just the inspiration. When one is in space, one cannot do what my friend from British Columbia would like me to do in this moment. When one is on a mission, one has to keep going. Our friend Colonel Hansen definitely did that.Aside Procedure · 15 wordsI want to draw attention to the Artemis II mission, and I mentioned Colonel Hansen.Procedure Claims · 68 wordsTwo other astronauts had a key role. One was Jenni Gibbons on Artemis II.4 She was in mission control.5 She was officially one of the backups on the mission, 6so she had to be ready. She went through the exact same training as the other astronauts. She is also the youngest Canadian astronaut and a huge source of pride, motivation and inspiration, not just to women and girls, 7Positioning · 20 wordsbut to Canadians across the country who can say that they can do this, that they can go into space.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 12 wordsI also want to draw the attention of members to Joshua Kutryk.Procedure Claims · 66 wordsWe are sending a second Canadian astronaut into space at the end of this year, to the International Space Station on another mission.8 He is going to be in space for around six months.9 We respect the personal cost, the sacrifice and training he has had to go through, the running of scientific experiments and the extent to which he is subjecting himself to that experimentation.Partly on point Thanks · 3 wordsWe thank him.Thanks Positioning · 49 wordsThese astronauts, these heroes for Canadians, are heroes they might have seen earlier in movies and are now able to watch on television in these missions. They are a really important part of the space sector and the inspiration that is coming in this year of space for Canada.PositioningPartly on point Procedure · 6 wordsIt is not just the astronauts.Procedure Anecdote · 15 wordsRecently I had the pleasure of meeting some young people who were employed by NordSpace, AnecdotePartly on pointClaims · 87 wordswhich is one of the companies looking to do, and that has done, some very successful tests around rocket launches in Canada.10 I met one of them at a recent Next Generation Manufacturing conference. She came into the sector through the Royal Canadian Air Cadets, specifically 631 Sentinel squadron in Scarborough. She told me that once one has a taste of aerospace, it never goes away.Partly on point We are building a sector that is inspiring hundreds of thousands of Canadians.Vague promise It is a sector they want to join. Positioning · 16 wordsWhen there is an appetite or an interest, what does government do to serve that interest?Positioning Claims · 30 wordsIn the 1960s, President John F.11 Kennedy articulated a national mission, and that attracted resources and energy. Obviously, the U.S. administration and NASA were very involved in leading that effort. Reasoning · 17 wordsIt is the connection between government action and inspiration that I want to draw members’ attention to. Claims · 45 wordsBy saying we are going to have sovereign space launch, I mean we are going to make space for more of the NordSpaces of the world to, again, as described in the legislation, launch rockets and launch vehicles that were not earlier contemplated in legislation. Reasoning · 20 wordsThis creates the space for young people, like the woman from 631 Sentinel squadron, to then get into that sector. Procedure · 5 wordsI was talking about space, ProcedureClaims · 51 wordsand there is a lot of interest in space this year, and these kinds of sovereign launch capabilities have a relationship to some of our deep space missions, but even the near-Earth orbit that would probably be the more daily subject of this piece of legislation also creates its own inspiration. Anecdote · 47 wordsA number of years ago, when I was teaching at what was then Ryerson University, now Toronto Metropolitan University, I assigned a biography of Elon Musk to my students as an example of, at the time, some of the ways in which he was pushing the frontiers.12Anecdote Claims · 127 wordsThere is a very fascinating chapter in the Elon Musk biography by Ashlee Vance on his work with SpaceX and the frontiers he was pushing with the scientists and the engineers in his company, saying, “Can we do this faster? Can we do this better?” He was imagining something that had never been done, except by a giant corporation and a giant space agency, the biggest entities in the world. He decided to move into space because of his inspiration and because of the capital he had to deploy. We know, and I know from teaching those students, that that effort, that imagination, that ambition inspired them and other Canadians.Unearned certainty Now we have other inspirations that are not just from Elon Musk and are not just American. Positioning · 25 wordsNordSpace itself is an inspiration. The astronauts I mentioned earlier are an inspiration. It is lighting a fire and an interest on campuses across Canada.Positioning Anecdote · 11 wordsI was recently at an Artemis II space launch celebration gathering.13Anecdote Claims · 12 wordsThere were gatherings across Canada for both the launch and the landing.14 Anecdote · 22 wordsWe felt our hearts beat as the capsule came toppling through the atmosphere and then cheered when those first parachutes came up.Anecdote Claims · 219 wordsIt is those moments that are inspiring students across Canada. At the Artemis II space launch event that I attended with Let’s Talk Science at the University of Toronto, I met a group of undergraduate students who were starting a rocket club, the second rocket club on campus.15 There was already a rocket club for the engineers, and this was a group of arts students and science students who were going to have their own rocket club. There are students who are joining competitions and getting course credits.Partly on point They are building the kind of excitement and economy that would be supported by this act. Recently, I had the pleasure and the opportunity as Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of Industry to visit Western University, the University of Waterloo and the University of Victoria, all campuses and locations that have this research energy but also student energy toward the space launch capabilities that this act would be building.16 I think my colleagues are going to share some of the other very specific benefits of this legislation, the economic benefits and the regional benefits. We are not going to have our own Kennedy Space Center or our own Cape Canaveral, but we can have versions of those places that people are proud of, that we can launch from and identify with. Procedure · 45 wordsI want to conclude by reminding us of the vision that is required here, with a quote by Langston Hughes, in the Dalton McGuinty book Be a Good One: 17Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die Life is a broken-winged bird That cannot fly.Procedure Claims · 15 wordsIn this legislation, we are giving Canadians from coast to coast the opportunity to fly. Positioning · 11 wordsIt is a great opportunity and a great piece of legislation.Positioning Procedure · 9 wordsI commend it to the members of the House.Procedure

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