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Joanne Thompson

65 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Jonathan Rowe (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, bankers make their money by having their clients enslaved to death, and the banker Prime Minister is no different. He is just another costly Liberal. They even said the quiet part out loud. On their graph, they show that Canada’s deficit-to-GDP ratio begins to skyrocket after the Prime Minister was appointed. Canadians now spend more money servicing the interest on Canada’s credit card than all of our federal health care payments. Will the Liberal government commit to a real Conservative fiscal plan that spends less on bankers and more on doctors?”
Statement grade
C+
66 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 58%Procedure 8%Positioning 34%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 38 wordswhile the member opposite, the Conservative member from Newfoundland and Labrador, reads his prepared notes and likes his bit of theatre, the people of Newfoundland and Labrador are interested in the nearly $1-billion investment in small craft harbours.12Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsThat is just the beginning.ProcedureVague promise Positioning · 22 wordsIt is time the member listens to his constituents and puts the work first.Off point The theatrics can come at the school play.PositioningPartly on point

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