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Steven MacKinnon

87 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Eric Lefebvre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister wants us to believe that he is creating a sovereign wealth fund. That is incorrect. A sovereign wealth fund is built with years of surpluses, budget surpluses and natural resource development. It is not built by charging $25 billion to Canadians’ collective credit card. The Liberals just ran up a record deficit, the biggest deficit outside of COVID-19. They are running up a record deficit without proving that they can manage public funds well. How can the Liberals use the credit card of future generations so shamelessly?”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 7%Claims 21%Reasoning 14%Promise 51%Positioning 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordslet us talk about future generations.Procedure Claims · 18 wordsMy colleague just mentioned the need for workforce training in Quebec and in the rest of the country.Off point Reasoning · 12 wordsWe also need to invest in ourselves and in major infrastructure projects. Promise · 44 wordsWe are going to enable Canadians to benefit from construction and from building a better Canada.Vague promise We are going to create job opportunities for our young people, job opportunities for the construction trades.Vague promise We are going to benefit from our workforce and our investments. Positioning · 7 wordsThat is what building Canada is about.PositioningPartly on point

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