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Mélanie Joly

86 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Dominique Vien (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, it is the way they have chosen to do it that is not right. The Prime Minister is following the same borrowing policies as his predecessor. Economists are sounding the alarm. Without measures to boost productivity, the weight of the debt relative to the economy will rise to a breaking point. We already have the worst food inflation in the G7. Why are the Liberals stubbornly following this path that is forcing Canadians to pay more for gas, groceries and housing?”
Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 41%Claims 50%Promise 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 35 wordsI think that my Conservative colleagues do not understand the sense of urgency in the Canadian economy. They would look at the trade war and twiddle their thumbs while standing back and doing absolutely nothing.PositioningOff point Claims · 43 wordsWhat we are doing, in essence, is reducing the government’s operational spending.1 We are making sure that we are spending less while investing in capital projects.2 We are making sure that we create investments.Vague promise It is all working, as the IMF has confirmed. Promise · 8 wordsWe will continue creating prosperity here at home.Vague promise

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